The Revised The Viking’s Pet – Chapter Four

Hello. Here is the last of the revised chapters. This chapter includes the old chapters five and six, as well as chapter seven which was never posted. So parts of this have never been read by my faithful readers. Hopefully you’ll enjoy it.

This is still a dark fic… Eric likes hurting sookie and will continue to do so. If this bothers you then you should stop reading this story. ‘Nuff said.

The Southern Vampire Mysteries and True Blood characters and places belong to Charlaine Harris, Allan Ball, and HBO. The Island Training Facility is inspired by Paul Blades’ two series The Klitzman Stories and The Klitzman Chronicles. No Copyright infringement is intended and I make no money from this story.

My beta team has a new member… DaenerysSedai has joined our motley crew, so this chapter was beta corrected by DaenerysSedai, Funsize and Cath. Thank you ladies for all your invaluable help! Also, this is the last chapter of this story that includes previously posted parts of this story, so I’d like to mention that the original content was beta corrected by Sephrenia1.

Now without further ado, here is the chapter…

Chapter 004 – Vampires, Handmaidens, and Faeries, Oh My!

The Revised The Viking’s Pet – Chapter Three

So here is the Revised version of Chapter Three… the original version was just 31 pages and 16,590 words long… the new and improved version is 58 pages and 31,615 words long, so I nearly doubled the length of this chapter… now a lot of it is previously posted… now that’s not to say I didn’t add new stuff to this chapter… there are several improved punishment scenes and and I took out the lovey dovey stuff. Originally chapters three, four, and five were all chapter three and I cut them up. Well I’ve put them back together since I can’t stand short chapters… so I hope you all enjoy the new and improved chapter three.

Chapter Three – The Hook

The Revised The Viking’s Pet – Chapter Two

Hello. I have the second chapter ready for your reading pleasure.  Be sure and read the author’s notes because I want everyone prepared for what they’re about to read and also I explain my use (or lack of use) of capital letters in names.

Chapter three is with funsize and will be sent to Cath soon so it’ll be a day or two before I can post it.

Many thanks to Sephrenia1 who edited the original version of this chapter and a Huge thank you to my two new Betas, Funsize and Cath. You both rock my world. Any remaining mistakes are my own.

so without further ado here’s chapter two…

Chapter Two – little pet and little limp dick

The Revised The Viking’s Pet – Chapter One

So here is the revised chapter one… the original was 48 pages  and 24,711 words long… the revised chapter is 55 pages and 28,953 words long, so there is quite a bit added for your reading pleasure…

The rest of the revised chapters should be up within the week… I have the next two chapters with my betas already and chapter four is almost ready for my betas, so it shouldn’t be long before I’m all caught up…

incidentally for those of you who read the original… the original had six posted chapters… the revised covers everything of those six chapters but is contained in only four chapters…

also the revised first four chapters have stuff in them that were not in the original… that is to say in addition to sprucing up and adding to the chapters, chapter four also contains parts of the unposted chapter seven that I wrote but never posted.

Anyways I’m already 30+ pages into chapter five so hopefully by the time I post all the revised chapters my betas will already be looking at chapter five.

So anyways without further ado here is the revised chapter one…

Chapter One – Big Man With A Gun

Coming Soon… New Version of The Viking’s Pet

Hello. I am rewriting The Viking’s Pet, I’ve been working on it for about a month now and I have two new Beta’s so in the next week or so new versions of the old chapters should be posted…

I have the first two chapters’ re-writes with my new Beta’s already so the first chapter should be up in a day or so…

I’ve added a lot of stuff to the new chapters and most of the chapters are now 50+ pages long… so there will be lots of good stuff for you to read soon.

In the mean time I took down all the old chapters so no one gets confused about what’s been fixed.

I will update the first chapter page and make a post when I post the first chapter…

Again it should only be a day or so before the new version of chapter 001 is posted. The chapter is currently with one of my Beta’s but she lives like 13 timezones away from me so it’s taking some time for her to get the chapter back to me. Once she gets any changes back to me I should be able to post the chapter.

So keep on the look out.

-Gray.

Looking for a BETA for two of my stories…

Hello. My wonderful Beta Sephrenia1 and I are aparently parting ways, she doesn’t like the torture I use in The Viking’s Pet so I’m looking for someone to Beta The Viking’s Pet who is, like me, into the torture.

I’m very sorry to see my working relationship with Sephrenia end like this and I hope she will continue to be my friend. I loved working with Sephrenia1 and I feel I am a better author because of her, so Thank you for all that you have done for me.

Also I’m working on an alternative to TVP that is strictly non-consensual… for now it’s just for me but I’m working on it in between bouts of writing TVP.

TVP started because I jones-ing for more Fair Trade by TexanLady, which as some of you know is a strictly non-con story…

TVP has turned out to be much more consensual for Sookie than I ever planned, in large part because Sephrenia1 led me away from the non-con stuff…which I have to say has worked out well for me as I feel that TVP is my best story to date…

but I can’t get the idea of a what Sephrenia1 called a “Never Happily After” out of my head… it just won’t leave me alone… I go to sleep thinking about it and I wake up thinking about it…

and so I’ve decided to write it, but I need a Beta for it and after talking to Sephrenia1 we decided that whoever Beta’s this non-con should also Beta TVP…now aparently she also feels like it would be best for me to find a new beta for ALL of my stories…

so I’m looking for someone who is good at grammar and has ideas about non-con stuff and torture… So if you or someone you know is into fiction with non-consensual situations and torture please email me at LilGray1326 @ gmail . com (just remove the spaces)

And if non-con isn’t your cup of tea but you’d like to Beta either or both of my other stories (It’s Elemental and Love-Hate-Sex-Pain) feel free to drop me a line about that.

Also if anyone is interested in reading the non-con story either drop me a line at the above email address or post a comment on this post and I’ll see about posting it for y’all to read…

Thanks for reading.

The Viking’s Pet Chapter 006 – Love Bites (So Do I)

Hi… here’s another chapter, this one is a little shorter than the others but I thought it was a good spot to stop at.

The title of this Chapter comes from the song of the same name by Halestorm.

Charlaine Harris owns everything Southern Vampire Mysteries.

Allan Ball and HBO own everything True Blood.

No copyright infringement intended. I make no money from this fiction.

I dedicate this chapter to my wonderful Beta, Sephrenia1, who’s always angling for more hope… well, here it is… HOPE in spades!

The Viking’s Pet Chapter 006 – Love Bites (So Do I)